Effective comments and Ineffective comments.

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Even After a Trade Deal, Be Wary of China

1. A person named Robin has a great comment on this article. He analyzed the author’s op-ed,
summary it and also talks about his thought and heard through his experience. and also he points out
some side effects that the author didn’t realize.
2. A person named RNS wrote a comment on this op-ed also. he finds the keywords and explains his
thought. and also he stands in other’s shoe to think about the problem. which increase his credibility.
1. A person named John takes a position on the other side of the author. he questioned the author’s
stand with history. and his own experience with this situation.
2   A person named Sarah makes an invitation for those people who are anti-vaccine to join and learn
some more vaccine. which made a good point to persuade author.
3  A person named Dweller take himself in the author’s shoes and thinks as the author thinks. also
saying the opposite opinion while standing on his side.
Ineffective

Even After a Trade Deal, Be Wary of China

  1. Stan only talks about his idea towards China and didn’t have to prove that China did it or not.
  2. all guessing, which is ineffective.
  3. Roy's comment is all talking about how China did wrong in the past. which is all history right?
  4. No man never make mistake.
  5. MS is trying to say China wants to overtake power and control the whole world without evidence
  6. and culture.

  1. Galfrido blaming parents that are anti-vaccine as a crowd.he is mad!
  2. Northcoast Coat saying they will find out all kinds of poison in those anti-vaccine people’s house..
  3. .which is irresponsible.  

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